Age/Gender: 21, Male
Location: NYC
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Prepare to see a bit more of me on the portal. i've been away but i have a ton of work in the making!
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really, that was unbelievable. you took a great concept and tweaked it with your own styles. just great.
5s all around :D
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i'm giving you a 10 for the series.
but i have to say this one didn't hit me as hard as reboot 8. maybe it was the flow, or the music. not sure. either way the series is great. very original and you can tell you put a ton of work into it. keep it up can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
The general consensus also seems to be the story is confusing. I have to admit this episode was made in chunks over a longer time than the other episode, after a while, it also gets really hard to keeping working on the same thing... and you start just "going through the motions". So. I'm going to completely change Reboot after this episode, make the story faster and make smaller episodes. My goal at first was to test the limits of flash.. but now that I have ... I realize there's some other stuff I have to work on o_o(you all know what i mean lol), I kind of let myself get lost in ideas.
Anyway, thanks for the review and look for the next episode in 3-4 months, it'll only be 7 minutes!
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this is amazing man! you really pulled it off nicely, don't stop progressing!!!
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it could use some touching up, but you were consistant and thats what is important. i agree with him in that the more practice the better you will get, but i don't think he's right in saying the score is inaccurate. i think it's quite fitting, if not too low. it's clear you put time into this so well done.
ending was a bit easy though. some guy just comes in and 1 shots him?
well, keep it up
jones-
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"haha i reviewed this just to say something to the"
guy before me, and then ill watch it, ganondorf DOES NOT suck at all... lol he's slow for a reason, because he hits so damn hard. if you learn to use him in the air you win, end of story. he has plenty of spikes too. and although it might not look like it. he's fairly good at getting back up from a fall, (after down + B you can re use up + B) i think the thing people don't realise is, every character is amazing. just need to know how to play em. (some are easier to pick up than others thats all...
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this piece shows that you have serious potential and that you will be rising up as a great animator one day (if you chose to continue)
it has a great feel to it, a somewhat unfinished look but for your first it's excellent.
keep with it, you'll do great.
-jones
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"have to say... pretty tired of these"
i try to see the good in these but this one had far too little. in fact i saw a part that was used in ANOTHER "random" collab by one of the artists who's in both. thats just lazy to me.
i am not one to usually bash animations but all of these random collabs have kinda weighed down on me a bit. tails falling was original, thats about it. (and no not just because it was tails and i'm a sonic freak who gasms with anything with their characters in it... just the idea and the clean animation of it, could have been any character)
SO tired of the moving lines. that is something you practice with, not something you submit. unless you use it creatively that is. i saw a Bunch of hammers killing people, a lot of stupid gun shots and all in all it just wasn't great. i think you guys are getting the shit end of the stick because people are tired of these... but STILL you should take into account that "random shorts" HAS BEEN DONE BEFORE, so you should have prepared for it. individually had these pieces been 30 seconds long and kept the same quality they would be blammed. so you string them together and you get a sub par collaboration.
i hope individually you all progress and continue to improve. you can all animate, just don't hold yourselves back doing these lame 4 second movies. i wish you all luck
-jones
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it is quite clear a lot of time was put into this, and it definitely payed off. this is an excellent piece. sync'd graphics and music is the perfect balance for one's eyes and ears. brings new experience to music.
to me it deserves a 4.0+ score
very well done
- jones
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you have the concept for fbf down which is a plus, but i'm personally not a fan of the random animations anymore :( but since it wasn't really short i give you props because i know you put time into this.
the 2 things that bugged me were the sun and the stewie/mario traces (if they weren't traced i beg your pardon, i didn't change your score for those reasons because i don't think it's a bad piece at all, haha sorry if it sounds like i'm just bashing btw... just constructive feedback, my score is accurate to what i think about it)
the sun changed positions lol and i wasn't sure about the gradient you chose for it.
Ba ill shut up, nice job and i look foward to more of your work
-jones
Author's Response:
I'm sorry that you're not that much into random flashes. And thank you for the criticism, to make perfect you need pointers.
Thanks.
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it wasn't monumental, and it was short but it was a good effort
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